Friday, February 8, 2013
JCCS Academic Language Assessment Week 21
Performance enhancing drugs, such as steriods, should not be allowed in sports. For example, atheletes PRIMARY concern should be getting better without using drugs. In addition, during the PERIOD of time of their career they should not use any drugs. Also, atheletes should create a new TRADITION so that other athletes don't want to use either. Overall, steriods and other drugs shouldn't be allowed in sports.
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A'Janea, you did a good job of using the words correctly. I want you to work on adding more factual ideas to the middle of your paragraphs, so you can really convince your reader.
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